W.A.L.T: use different types of sentences to improve writing
Describing my first day at school?
Well In Assembly everyone got given treats and yum stuff and my teacher was riding a hovercraft. My first day was super crazy so, How was your first day at school like? Let me tell you how this happened.
Class Seven, six, eight had lined up like it was just a normal day going to Assembly, and oh boy were they wrong. As we walked in we could see Teachers and students even our principal cooking and baking yummy stuff being given out like: Mini pancakes, s'mores and many more! When we walked in we knew straight away that this was going to be an exciting Immersion Assembly and a first day back!
Just as every class was in , the immersion Assembly started. Mr Burt gave us a big welcome to Term two and the theme for the term is…”Tinkering tools and toys” so basically just technology. After all the talking it was time for team items. Now lets skip all of the other ones and talk about team four!
Team 4, well they created a movie about a videogame that they created, and let me tell you it was...Hilarious! The voice of the character and the background was cool and fantastic! Now I am really looking foward for this term!
After all the team Items Mr Barks or as we call him ( Mr maker) told us many ways how he tried to fly. But then he created a hoverboard in the holidays and he said “ He was riding through his neighbors drive way! Since he thought that everybody didn’t believe him he told Mr sommerville as his little guinea pig and he just thought that it would be funny! So Mr sommerville sat on the hoverboard and it actually worked but...we thought he was going to fall off the stage but he didn’t which was good.
One thing led to another and the hoverboard explanation was finished and so was Assembly. Everyone was walking out with joy and happiness so excited to see what their teachers have in plan for this term. Thank you for reading my writing! BYE!
Task Description: The task was to write complex senteces to make our writing better!
