Showing posts with label Reading. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Reading. Show all posts

Tuesday, 15 September 2015

Market day,Market day!

WALT:  write an interesting and detailed recount .

You know how kids go to school, well on friday I think you could call it kids go to work day? Our Year 5 and 6 had a market day last friday. We bought,we sold and we earned! But not actual money but fake,Pts and pieces. By working?

Homeware,kitchen,jewels and accessories,custom stationery,music and toys are our trade and enterprise groups. I am in homeware and where I make coaster and vases. In each group we make a product according to the theme of our group. We paint,cook,plat,print and make.

Setting up wasn’t the hardest part. It was just making your stall look pretty. But putting your products on the table, getting your sign, putting a cloth on the table. Like it might not be the hardest thing ever but it can be the most boring thing ever. I was just glad that the setting up part was over.       

Selling coasters and vases wasn’t that easy because kids want cake, brownies and toys.
But at the end I made 34pt. Who knew that Vases and coasters could be so cool! I enjoyed my selling experience.
                                                                                                                                  
I really hope that next term we will have the fun of doing another market day with different products and hopefully more delicious food. I can imagine it now.

Highlight on the rubric where think your writing scores
Recount Writing

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Write for my reader
I've tried to think about my reader
My writing shows some awareness of reader because my writing is quite clear and I have tried to interest my reader.
My writing is easy to understand and I have tried to tell the reader what it was like to be there by giving details and my thoughts.
My writing really considers audience as reader because I have kept their interest and made them feel like they know exactly what it was like for me.
Purpose
I tried to meet the purpose
My text goes some way towards meeting the purpose
The message is clear in some parts of the recount.
My text fully meets the purpose.
The message is clear all through the recount.
Introduction
My introduction does not yet clearly orientate or hook in my reader.
My introduction gets some buy in from audience and they can understand what I am going to write about.
My introduction hooks in my reader and it is clear what I am writing about.
My introduction wows my reader!
Paragraph Topics
My paragraphs are confused and don't follow my plan.
I have tried to follow my plan.
Most my paragraphs are about 1 big idea and I have added some detail.
My paragraphs have some complex as well as simple sentences. Post paragraphs give details about 1 big idea.
I have followed the paragraph topic in my plan.
My paragraphs have complex and simple sentences. Paragraphs all give details about 1 big idea.

Task description:This is our market day recount. We got the task to write five paragraphs about our market day on Friday. We bought and we sold products. The reason why we had a market day is according to our topic this term "Trade and enterprise".

Monday, 31 August 2015

Poems???

Walt:use our inferencing skills to find meaning in the text.
Task description: This is a one slide presentation that I have created with my buddy Sulieti.
We have turned this poem into something unusual. you might think its one the thing but at the end
you will be surprised.

This was an exciting task but as hard as difficulty goes I think that this task was about a 5 out of 10.
So I thought it was hard but in reality it wasn't.

Thursday, 21 May 2015

My advice!

  W.A.L.T: Find proof of the authors Message!

Task description: We got the task to find a game sutibile for the character that has sent an e-mail to ask for advice. We then do research to find a game sutibile for him. Hop you enjoy!

Tuesday, 28 April 2015

Video game poster!



W.A.LT: To give a brief explanation of video games!

Description of learning: We got the task to make a poster about a video game console, list 3 popular games from that console and make it all look pretty.

Tuesday, 31 March 2015

Who likes Sharks!

W.A.L.T: know that other people might take a different judgement from the same information.

Mr Goodwin gave us the task to read a journal about shark. He then created a presentation for us to answer in full sentence's!

Who cares about penguins!

W.A.L.T: know that other people might take a different judgement from the same information.


 Mr Goodwin gave us the task to read a journal about penguins. He then created a presentation for us to answer in full sentence's!


Tuesday, 10 February 2015

Whitebait fritters!

Walt: We are learning to follow the instructions and Whitebait fritter!


This presentation is about Whitebait fritters! I am explaning how Whitebait gets caught and how people have eaten it past the years. And How it is transfered to supermarkets. I have learned that Whitebait is really hard to find but if you fish in the right places then you actually might find some. Mr Goodwin gave us the task to follow the instuctions and make the slides look pretty without colouring in the background but adding detail.

Friday, 27 June 2014

Boat!









It is special!

It is like the wind is the spirit hitting the sail.

So it can balance against the water.



It is a strong and special tree.



Squalls are a big gust of wind and the spirit of the wind can  blow the sail.



The wind struck them and papa told them to go onto the outrigger.



To turn around.




The boat will go side ways

Thursday, 5 June 2014

Sailing!!

Sailing
WALT: Analyze surface features and the language used.  Look beyond the text - Inferencing

1 Unfurl means make or become spread out from a rolled or folded state, especially in order to be open to the wind.
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2. You hold your neck up high and which ever way the wind is blowing you would feel it on your neck.

3.Another way to find out where the wind is going is you get a balloon and blow it up and release it into the sky and when the balloon moves the wind is blowing it into the opposite direction when the wind is blowing on the other side.

4. The reason why the optimist is so sturdy,safe and unsinkable is because of the structure and the wind and the weight.

5. Make as many smaller words as you can from the words ‘Optimist Sailing Dinghies’:
  • Safe
  • sturdy
  • Unsinkable

6. Find the meaning of each of these sailing related words:


Meaning
rigging
The ropes and wires supporting the structure of the boat.
bail
Release or secure
rudder
Something flat that is pushed into the stem of the boat or ship for steering.
tiller
Of air,water or weather.
centreboard
A board that can be lowered through the keel sailing boat to ride a sideways movement.

Tuesday, 13 May 2014

The boat race!


The Boat Race CN.3.98
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WALT: find and use the relevant part of a text to accurately answer a question.


1.Tim had felt sad when Jason yelled at him because you can see his emotions on Tims face


2. Tim made his boat by reading books about boats


3.Tim had used a milk bottle for the platform of the boat


4.  Fill in the table below with information from the text.


Students Name
Boat Type
Description
(what it looks like)
Propulsion
(how it moves)
Sarah
Yacht
Classy with multicoloured sails
wind power
Tim
jolly roger
Very strong and old
battery power
Brendon'sTrimaranGreen and hardwind power
JasonwarshipScars and woodwind power






5. Reflect on the different boats in the story.
Write three sentences explaining which boat you would make and why.  


If I was in the race I would build a Waka because it represents Maori and I am Maori.
If I was in a race I would have a Canu because it will be challenging to make it move but it won’t be impossible.
If  I was in a race I would go back in the olden days and do a pirate ship because I wanted to see how you can make it out of recycled things and the decorating.

Tuesday, 6 May 2014

Basket boats!!

Basket  Boats
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2. Thanh wants to be a fisherman like his father when he grows up.


3. Qui Nhon is in the southern coast of Vietnam


4. Thung chai is a boat that is made out of bamboo


5.1.They help sort out the fish 2.Then drag out the thung chai



6. How does the boat get its shape?They start with the top which they get a bambo and curve it to make it like the shape and start weaving down.


7.A sap from a speacial tree is what make's the bamboo stick together.

8. The sap help's the bamboo from going bad and makes it water tight


9. List three ways the thung chai can be used for.
-fishing
-saling
    -crab fishing